tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8784059251351092310.post3443349415204857726..comments2023-10-20T12:19:14.633-03:00Comments on arquivos halcyon / the halcyon arquives: The Stillness ResidingGilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8784059251351092310.post-77044874151902205652007-08-24T01:15:00.000-03:002007-08-24T01:15:00.000-03:00Hi rhian / crowwoman! Thank you so very much! It’s...Hi rhian / crowwoman! Thank you so very much! It’s a pleasure to join the poetry train and I’m very glad you liked the poem. I wrote this late at night when everything was very silent and I guess that helped it flow easier.<BR/><BR/>Hi crafty green poet! Thanks! An artistic flavor to self-expression, Clare did some beautiful haiku for the tag and that kind of gave me the idea for writing a poem about it too. Your comment is most very welcome! <BR/><BR/>Hi Clare! Thanks for tagging me, by the way. The word puncture has this intrinsically deep meaning that helped me describe the way I’ve been feeling about my surroundings lately. Thank you for your words, they are very inspiring!<BR/><BR/>HI Mom and Dad! Your comment was definitely the most surprising! Thank you so much for your support and your kindness. I an also very proud to be your son!Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8784059251351092310.post-27273430667006067652007-08-23T20:08:00.000-03:002007-08-23T20:08:00.000-03:00We love to read your poems. And we do it not just ...We love to read your poems. And we do it not just through the eyes of a reader, but with hearts of parents. We love you son very much and we are so proud of you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8784059251351092310.post-80244402561438087402007-08-23T12:27:00.000-03:002007-08-23T12:27:00.000-03:00Hi Gilson! This is so incredibly beautiful! I love...Hi Gilson! This is so incredibly beautiful! I love how you did this tag -- very creative and filled with exquisite and shimmering sun rays. And the lines "my roots have punctured earth/ and earth has punctured me" and "of never letting go/ and loving all I know" really spoke to me about life and the precious interrelationship everything has. Awesome, Gilson!!<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8784059251351092310.post-59230738795895616282007-08-23T10:54:00.000-03:002007-08-23T10:54:00.000-03:00very creative response to a tag!very creative response to a tag!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8784059251351092310.post-21986185852320375182007-08-22T19:05:00.000-03:002007-08-22T19:05:00.000-03:00oh wow! i love this poem! there are so many stanza...oh wow! i love this poem! there are so many stanzas that strike right at the heart of me that it's hard to pick a favorite. The end though was powerful, symbolic and profound:<BR/>"While sleeping on a branch<BR/>Extension of a dream<BR/>My roots have punctured earth<BR/>And earth has punctured me"<BR/><BR/>so very very glad you joined the poetry train!!! i just wish everyone else had had a chance to catch this one. I'll see if i can't send some people flying over here.<BR/>thanks again for that beautiful poem!Rhianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17825362911575046105noreply@blogger.com